Wednesday, July 28, 2010

Nadine Jansen Comparisons

says: Addicted to Exercise 1

Holaaaa, would not have spoken of Addicted to Scripture, right? It is a group that put exercises or projects related to write something and all participants do. If you are interested I leave the banner here.

The

Exercise 1 is:
What I propose is the following. I bring you some pictures of rooms and places, of which each will choose the one you like for your description (anybody can do with all the pictures, if worker). The idea is to describe that image, as is evident every one will make your style, and most likely everyone will see different elements in the images. You can deal with it as you wish, create an atmosphere or even include it in a sequence or scene, this is a taste of the consumer, the only condition is that the description of what you see in the picture should appear in your writing.

The image I have chosen is this:


! Here we go with the exercise!

Exercise 1 ####### #######


walked as if water were immutable strings. Crept and crawled with regret, the water did not move as if he were not there. Ignoring his presence as he would like to do with it.

finally came to a bed of dark, damp earth, and jumped on it. Being their eyes to the sky. Trees were withered, as if they had wanted to grow. Surely it would be light purple all covered. Engaging the senses and emotions.

But not his memories.

was about to kill her, she was nearly killed, nearly kill ... Perhaps in those moments were not in his human form. But still remember, the horrible and distressing it was. He was nearly killed as he smiled.

had lost everything, their dignity and their humanity. Continue no longer knew, no longer wanted to continue this story.

And get carried away by the melancholy of the place as his eyes shed tears.


End of year ####### #######


What do you think? "A little tear, right? XD ~ ~

Byeeee Holiiiis

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